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Exercise 8 - Selecting the correct concluding sentence for each body paragraph



Instructions: Read the paragraph and click on the correct answer. Scroll down if you do not see the Answer box. If wrong, try again.


      Sentencing teenage offenders as adults has a strong deterrent effect on other teenagers. Giving teenagers guilty of violent crimes long sentences in adult prisons sends the clear message to other teens that crime does not pay. A 1998 Florida study found that within a year or two after local prosecutors started to try teenagers as adults, Florida's potential teenage criminals got the message. Teenage offenders who were interviewed reported that they decided to stop offending as soon as they knew they could be tried as adults. Furthermore, many of these offenders said that seeing their peers tried as adults gave them the needed "wake-up call" that committing crimes would indeed have serious consequences. _____________________________________ ________________.

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